I like this. I'm not sure I have anything constructive to say. Space = good. pale faces without eyes = also good. I think it might be better without the skull worm, but that's kind of a matter of opinion. The skull worm feels a little cliche, because skulls are a little overused, but I really like the dude, and especially the shiny bits coming out of his head. It makes it feel more space-y. Good work, sir!
I rather liked it the creepy skull thing is interesting looking, and for the record, the moment I saw oompa loompa in the description I started laughing. took me a couple of tries to see the rhymeing part but I'm not exactly the brightest of the bunch
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