My opinion to improve
Obviously , the aim of pic is to shine our eyes , but not enough , she will 100% shine our eyes if you draw her wearing skirt which we can see her legs and see her belly
the redux is cute but this is HOTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Little more heavily 'anime' than the redux. Face is admittedly intense.
I like this way better than redux to be honest.
More life-like, more depth you seem to like to make all women characters blush idk why, you have belly button showing and moderate size breasts however long sleeves, big man's belt buckle nice top and earings on hat VERY CUTE HAT
I like blush ;) she could handle my presents any day whats with strap up top? weird placement, maybe your just not great with ladies garments. Overall 6/5, 11/10 no complaints.
but why present soo mall :( me dont want mini golf ball lol
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