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Pinocchio Unstrung cover

Here is the cover of my webcomic that I'm working on which is based off of Knott's Scary farm maze Pinocchio Unstrung.

You've heard the story about a puppet who wanted to be human. But the true story didn't have a happy ending. We're about to go on a journey of this puppet's downward spiral of Insanity. Revenge comes with no strings attached.

Maze walk-through: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T-blOpRRzVg&t

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MysteryRider

2021-08-08 13:24:40

So he’s accurate to the book this time?

Holynnwood

2020-04-10 13:57:08

I hope this comic comes out I have no words but a amazing

wobwobrob

2019-04-12 18:14:36

Really like this. I think you could be a bit bolder with the stained glass. Needs that thicker art deco style lead holding the glass in place.

I think that the style of the title should match that of the actual image. It has a 3D finish compared to the slick cartoon style of the images. I reckon you should have a stab at hand drawing the letters rather than typing them.

You should also check the perspective of the hammer and the severed arm.

Overall, I would read the shit out of this if I saw it so well done!

KittyMagooArt responds:

Thank you so much for your feedback and criticism as it does help me out! I only did the title the way it is since its what the typeface of the maze that this is based off; which I actually use my hand to trace it out.

https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/knottsscaryfarm/images/1/18/Knotts-Scary-Farm-2012-Pinocchio-Unstrung.jpg/revision/latest?cb=20130517212947

But other than that I will keep that in mind as I do the pages when it comes to perspective as what I'm trying to do it to make a collage of everything with photos and draw what I see fits best. Once again thank you so much for the feedback! :)