The art, character wise, looks fine. What is recommended for completion is something to fill the void of white, like a texture or background.
Thanks for taking time to make a critique!! In my last drawings I´m adding some background color for all of your eyes sake!! And if you like my art, you can also see my process in my Youtube channel, there are speedpaints of my last drawings starting with these Bastion here. The link is in my last drawings.
Thanks for the comment!!
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