Hmm

Negatory on that good buddy, I just took .34 points away, sorry about that. But I can say, add depth via shadowing on the right breast, and add some more fat on it too, also a pose that isn't so radical would be much more calming to the eye. I think the fact that the hair is missing is unfamiliar to people and causes fear, resulting in 0's. The background is classic trash, nobody likes the blank or meaningless backgrounds man. I'm not joking when I say even some trees or sky would be nice.

Sorry.

I'm afraid there isn't a lot I can commend about this. Proportion wise you seem to know what you're doing but there's a lot of isues with width and volume, especially looking at the size of the head in relation to the rest of the body. The muscles in the neck don't seem to click together as they should given the way her head has turned and the limbs have this rubbery look to them. The top of the head could also do with a bit more volume as well.
Keep trying, though. You'll improve the more you practice life drawing and figure studies. :)

Nice anatomy

nice hands! you drawing hands very well!, the paintig is good.
I dont like so much the lineart.
The yellow ligths look so good too!