No.
The chest is perfect, don't fuck with it.
All that's needed, however, is for you to fix the waist. It is too thin.
Elf woman wif Half mask
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I was drawing and this is her. I don't really ever color my work since i went color blind, yes i got fryer grease in my eye and went color blind isn't that wierd?!?!
jr73380 responds:
Cool, okay I can see that.
it look pertty good
i hadent seen this style but i looks ok put some color
jr73380 responds:
I cant see color......... (sigh)
Really good style.
You do good here.
not the greatest ive seen
it has a some proportional issues but i like how theres a lil bit of blue in there
jr73380 responds:
Ok I can see that, I think the chest needs to be smaller, she was originally supposed to have armor but i never reproportioned it.
it's all right
it's ok... but you know that it could be a lot better....
try adding more shadows and stuff....
jr73380 responds:
I do realize that, I am currently photoshopping it as per request from a friend. Thanks for the honesty!
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