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I kind of like how the hair came out...but the rest is fail.

Specially the background.

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Yeah, I'm wondering too how you pictured her before this. Yeah, the head is nice, and the eyes are cute (hairbow adds nice effect) but then I look down to the neck and below and begin to question, which way is she facing? One could say she has her back to us, but the way the hair is, and where the neck meets the shoulders seems like she's facing us. I'm not sure how much help the arm is, since I only see one, and though it's the left arm, I still think she has her front facing us whenever I go back to the neck or hair. It seems like some sort of amalgamation of direction here.

Maybe if you touched this up in a sort of second version, you could fix the points I noted, and work on the background too.

All in all, it's still good art, so I'll give it a 3/5 all.

looks like a greyscale figure

impossible, but it's kinda hypnotic, but i don't think you did it on purpose, still caN't take my eyes of it, and in movement it gives some visual efects!! come on! (scrolling through the screen up and down the cat in the painting gets bigger and smaller) if they were mistakes, they are best mistakes i've seen ..10 and 5/5

cats!

aren't they lovely!

there are a lot of obvious things wrong with this picture
but there are some good points
a 7 seems fitting

Jcdr responds:

Thanks

Not bad...

But still, like the guy two posts below it's not a "masterpiece" either. Nice concept and I'm loving what's in the background. I love the way you did her hair too. the shading needs to be worked on a bit though, try imagining a light source and the direction of the light and also try to make the shadows and whatnot more dynamic and realistic. Overall it's pretty nice but just keep at it and I'm sure you'll make amazing pieces in no time! Ciao ^_^

its not all bad

it looks good, and the hair does look great here!

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Mar 31, 2010
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