Cool design! This is fantastic.
oh you want the guy to be unpredictably berserk, hence the teeth shown? Well, try only showing the lips more then springin them teeth on us. That'll help, I think! ;) this looks nice, Hyps!
God Damn You Hyptosis,
I had this story ready and everything :D
At any rate practice makes perfect, and I have to ask were the lipless man puts all those teeth, because in the bottom panel; it doesn't look like his mouth has them anymore.
Or is that just me >.>
I was actually worried about the teeth thing, I wanted him to be the type that berserks randomly, and reveals he's monsterous. Shrug. Haha. I might have drawn them too big, no big deal though. ^_^
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