I really liked the comic, but your mission statement at the end has elevated you to be a hero in my eyes. Godspeed! o7

Love it! It has all the things I love about your comics: the anime jokes, the Kojima dialogues, the politics that nerds love, and the emotional sincerity that made Blue Rivers my favorite comic. All in one package from start to finish.

Man I love how much style your stuff has. Your characters always have nice designs and variety
The worldbuilding is great, I've always been a fan of Evil Psychic stories because I grew up playing Star Control 2 (wanna play Mental Omega for that reason)
It's a bit too soon to make any judgement calls about anything else like writing, though I do agree with what Remi-le-Oduen said below

I liked the afterword, I always like it when stories feel genuine and earnest, It's why Higurashi is one of my favourite stories. Admittedly my own creative ambitions have been stifled by insecurity and a desire to bury what ideas or emotions I wanna express to avoid exposing myself especially with how critical people are nowadays. I need to figure out how to train myself to stop feeling embarrassed or ashamed, If I did I would probably be a lot further in life than I am now

P.S btw I discovered Blu Rivers Revolution from your art and somehow went through the whole thing not putting the dots together that you're literally the guy who made it. I thought you were a fanartist lol

best of luck on your mission, boss

Just a cool cheesy fun story!