HOply Shti!
This is really good HeroicDeath! You seem to have improved a lot since the start of 2010 back when I first scouted you. I can't believe you were unscouted you when you shouldn't have been and then you were picked up by Saurus and now you're coming out with these really good portraiture arts, that annoys me.. especially now when that Cube guy is all like "I'm gonna have more scouts than you soon Cloudy >:D Haha" ..yea but anyway, really good work on the shape, colour and light. You just need to work on clarity and giving your drawings more texture and finer details. Making the edges of things and shadows appearing more clearly. This at the moment has a blurry look to it. More detail on things like the hair and eyes could make this seem quite a lot more spectacular. You can't really achieve perfect detail so what many people do is create fake detail or what seems like detail but they're just painting or drawing in a certain way. For example, painting a bit with small, random, long strokes when drawing hair makes it seem like the each hair is drawn in detail when the artist is just doing it randomly. Ok cya dood B)
