Somebody mentioned before that the obscured part made the piece look weird, which it does if you look at it. But personally, I think it adds a nice effect if you look at the other half of her face and don't focus on the outline. I like how you're in a sort of semi-chibi style, it just made the drawing /so/ cute. xD
Alguien mencionÃ³ antes de que la parte oculta hace la mirada extraÃ±a pieza, lo que hace, si usted lo mira. Pero, personalmente, creo que aÃ±ade un efecto agradable si nos fijamos en la otra mitad de su cara y no se centran en el esquema. Me gusta cÃ³mo se estÃ¡ en una especie de semi-chibi estilo, que acaba de hacer el dibujo tan lindo. xD
Very warm. I love it very much.
Good, with some notes.
First off, I LOVED the shading, and your intuition with colors, and your line cleanliness is definitely something to take notice to.
But here's the one flaw: I know in Japanese influenced art, it is common to show the outline of part of an eye while blocked by the hair, but when the whole eye is obscured, it looks off. Also, the whole half of her face is outlined. Idk, I've just never seen that before.
Still, those good qualities I mentioned make it hardly noticeable.
otherwise she would look so big head, more than she seem to be already.
Is this legal?
Just kidding that's a great piece of art. It's very cute.
The love of a 20 year old guy and a 21 year old girl that looks like a 12 year old girl?
Yeahp.... that's legal n_n
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