The angling of the shadows and design work is fine overall, but you need to beocme more confident in your linework to keep it from being shakey, which would help make things like hair and body parts look more natural. For comics especially, give some focus to structure/anatomy building and the like.
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Part 1 of a small origin comic for Sam
Critique and advice is appreciated! this is my first time doing a digital comic
GrimBoi14 responds:
thank you I'll use this advice to get better :D
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