Manifest your spectre is one of my ideas for a comic series. This post is the 2nd of 6 batches of pages showing the pilot chapter.
Aaaand that's a wrap! I probably won't make any more chapters for... at least a couple years. There's other projects I wanna work on, + there is a lot of work to do behind the curtains so that the true 1st chapter of MyS solves a good portion of the issues with this pilot.
I encourage you to give me your feedback on my comic, you will probably tell me of problems I'm already aware of, but just in case something has slipped through the cracks plus to know how dire the problems are in relation to each other I wanna hear your opinions! ^0^
Thank you for reading! I hope you stay around for my future projects too! :D
And here I thought you were opening up to a whole series!
Regardless, you've done great work setting this all up, loading up on that info without dragging the reader through dumps of explanations. The way you've presented the setting, we can tell what all these exotic concepts are without needing even an aside to say "this works like this".
(Except for that phone bit~)
Thank you very much! I do wanna make this into a series, it's just... that can't be my priority right now. Perhaps I'll start working on that a few years from now.
About the way I gave exposition on how this world works, thank you a lot for your feedback! It's very reassuring, I was worried I front-loaded the comic with too much exposition!
I intend to, in the future, make a proper "chapter 1" which reuses almost all of these pages, but adds new ones before these and changes some of the dialogue, with that I hope to explain a lot of things better and over more panels, so the exposition doesn't get overbearing. In general I already have a lot of ideas about how to improve this. :D
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