I love your style! It's so bright and colorful, and so clean. You managed to hit the perfect sweetspot in complexity of form in a vector artstyle, the airlock is a great example of this, it just feels good to look at. Composition is great too! The middle section of page 2 and the landing sequence in page 9 are very satisfying to read through.
Some of the smaller panels can get a little busy at a quick glance (in page 3, for instance), but nothing that detracts from the reader experience, and that's really an isolated critique anyway, as this problem doesn't really appear again in the other pages you published! The variety in speech bubble form is good also, the UI design on the integrated technology bubbles is great at conveying the user experience of such a concept.
Oh, and the writing and humor is great, too! I'd love to see where this goes.