the egyptian theme is a nice pick you've got there! the shading and coloring is ON POINT! the linework is impressive considering its done by a mouse. and the palette you choose for your entry is interesting .but it didn't immediately grab my attention .the design itself is well put together but it seems it could be improved even further. (that's just my opinion ) good luck in the contest ^^
"SuperSpellHeroes" - Ancient Egyptian Jane Design Art (Final)
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I want to thank Jazza Studios for giving me this precious oppertunity to help me push myself to draw more, change, and improve my drawings on Gimp with a mouse! XD
...I hope my effort pays off.
Jazza Wizard outfit Competiition - https://www.drawwithjazza.com/news/wizard-design-2018
(((You should check out my journey from START to FINISH by clicking on this link below)))
"Progress + Evidence" -https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/gingerming/superspellheroes-egyptian-by-gingerming
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GingerMing responds:
Yes! Someone did suggest to me that one thing I should do immediately for my next artwork is to have 3 different tone colours, so their is a depth to the character. After that, I'll work on 4 tones, and so on...
Talking about grabbing your attention. perhaps it's the colours I used "White, Red, Yellow" But should have a spectrum. For example, light red- red- dark red. light yellow, yellow, dark yellow.
Thank you for your suggestion! and I really appreciate the compliment. :D
OH WAIT! OH MANNN! Maybe I should have a golden snake, having it's mouth bite the yellow crystal, that would have stand out!
I really like the Egypt theme you picked. And it's amazing that you drew it with mouse! It for sure looks like it belongs to the game! :) Maybe as Natsum1 under me said, the crystal on the wand, make it with little less opacity(so it looks transparent) and give it a little shine next time :D But that's not a big deal. Otherwise I really adore your desing! :)
And I hope I didn't come out rude :D
GingerMing responds:
Please don't think you are being rude! even if a comment was very critical and harsh, I would still really appreciate it. The more people thinking the same enforces me to think deeper about it. Thank you for your helpful suggestion! :D
Okay, Opacity and shine.
I think it looks great especially considering drawing with a mouse. The coloring is nice and they all match. I like the design you made with the Egypt theme its cool~ although I'm not sure exactly what is on the staff? That's just me though.
GingerMing responds:
Thank you for pointing that out!
Yes, I didn't quite draw the crystal on the wand as good as I thought. What I need to do next time is to make it look more clear.
On top of the wand is suppose to be a crystal, like the ones on other Jane's character design in the game. It's angled in a way, which is a reference to the Egyptian god RA, whos staff is slightly angled on the end.
Check out my work in progress art, it shows the reference picture of an Egyptian god.
https://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/gingerming/superspellheroes-egyptian-by-gingerming
Ok one last thing, now you just need to remove the tag from your WIP so you aren’t disqualified for having two entrees. If you want to check all the rules, the competition page can be found on drawwithjazza.com under news. (I would paste a link but I don’t think you’re allowed to in these)
GingerMing responds:
Oh shoot, I just realized what you meant by WIP (work in progress) to take out the tag. THANKS again! X)
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