I love it! This is a really good origin story. Very tight and compact, but there’s so much to this world. I dig the feminine ending a lot (look it up, kids!). I love the style, and the colors are so good. Romi is a fun protagonist, and I would love to see her in action again. Awesome job! Thank you so much for entering the contest!

I like the colors

This is an excellent comic. Romi is a great protagonist, and having the story told through her inner monologue lets her personality and wit shine. You manage to set up, build up and satisfyingly resolve the plot in 16 pages, while also making me interested in what happens to Romi next. Love the linework, but especially the colors and how you use them to convey mood and ambience. And there are neat moments of humor scattered throughout - all hail Fish Pope. Basically, I really enjoyed this. Great work and good luck in the contest!