kinda hard to see what's going on here because of the colours and the natural noise associated with the pencils you used, but you made the outlines of two of the characters thicker so that others can tell them apart. the visual distortion induced by the shapes you used confuses me, and i'm not sure if you wanted that.

however, i like the variation in how much you coloured each part - it's halfway between completely messy and glowing. the shapes nicely vary too.

(edit: since you intended the mess, i'll give you an extra half star.)