Great work man! I like the simple slice of life style you have going. That being said, I think there’s some pages where you’re overusing the potential that can be used for full page panels, that should be emphasized for dramatic moments or making a large establishing shot. I can see why you did it to meet the page limit, but I think when it comes to comedy wide shots make moments funnier and you can DEFINITELY add more panels to the pages. I’d love to see MORE!

I like it, and the talking was good. I think it's a bit empty, but I think that adds something when you add colour and use it to show emotions. I think the stomch of Sue is too long, and her hands are wired in some pages like page 8 and page 4 (she has 4 fingers in 1 hand). I think this comic was fun to read.