This is a really nice piece
As for the areas of adjustment the topless woman the first things I gravitated to were her nose and chin, in the three-quarter pose you wouldn't see either that much or at all the second nostril.
Also the chin has a very hard line when it should just be some simple shading.
Her exposed cheek could use a little more shadowing just under the high cheek bone
With the woman lying down her human fingers are a bit too muscular and wide, also with the angle the nails should curve outward and not inward.
These however are incredibly tiny marks compared to the whole piece, it really is nice in both its setting, placement, and time of day when it comes to your shading.
I especially love the background work and the tiny flecks of dust being caught by the morning rays.
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After 8-9h, I'm really happy. It's fun to work on some piece a little longer than other. I don't know what I could change or adjust, trying to look for it but. It feels like it is one of the better pieces lately I manage to get done. Details can always be better, way I don't making it better is just because it is time consuming when I aiming for the moment to get better at creativity and human body for example.
Hope you like it as well! Let us continue drawing and evolve together.. with a smile!
speedpaint: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CDV3QkeTMGY&feature=youtu.be
At first, huge thank you for such a comment, really appreciate this!
And thank you for taking time to analys the drawing, I felt a day after I got done with it I got a little blind to parts of the picture so it is a reason I didn't see anything, but really thank you for the help!
I see what you notice out and it is really helpful, it is details what's making a different for us who paying attention to smaller things and want to evolve, trying to save it in the memory for the future pieces! Just need more practice and time ;)
Lovely you liked it overall, thank you! Let us continue practice and let us see what the future pieces will look like!
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