Not art critique but for comics: put the reveal on a different page to build tension about it.
Honey Lemon comic Issue 1 page 3 inks
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Inks of the 3rd page of issue 1 to my Honey Lemon fan comic based on the original Marvel comic (NOT THE DISNEY VERSION) of Big Hero 6. Baymax and Hiro taking out Yokai only to reveal the 1st 3 pages was just a movie. Word bubbles will be added to the color version. This is mostly an exercise in making comics. Words to be added later in the color version.
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