HELP I CAN'T MAKE PONIS I'VE BEEN PRACTICING ALL WEEK AND THIS BARELY HAS BEEN THE BEST RESULT IVE GOT PIPIPI

(I also tried to transfer them from sketch to finished drawing but I didn't really like it so I only made one aaaa)

Btw the character is Smashu Flashu/Smashu Ultimax, I LOVE his videos on youtube so I wanted to draw him but I dont really like the result so I hope he doesnt see it AKJSDASDASD