good
its good
it looks like she is poking her head out of the paper
it looks a bit unfinished tho
if you drew it more simplistically you could draw it faster
if you drew it faster you could make more
and if you make more you could make animation you would need a lot of paper
perhaps use both sides of paper possibly draw 2 frames per side
after a few frames of simplistic drawings draw a detailed one
and crop your next art submission half of this is a white space