It's a magnificent piece comrade, your work is great...

*Approves this art* Happy Pixel Day to you too!

Terrible my ass, you did good

Looks pretty good. Not much of a reviewer of art commissions but this looks pretty cool. If this was a game cover for a jrpg or western rpg game I would get it to see what the game had to offer. Also, the art doesn't look as bad you say it is. : D

The vibe is super retro, looks cool!