And so we have another art piece here filled with some entertaining value aswell as some interesting art creativity and thats what i really look for so nice effort on bringing the differant elements together with this one. This actually works so its notbad and the idea of this is even better, kinda fits the whole concept just perfectly so you did do a nice job here and it was pretty good i thought, wouldnt mind some extra color here and there though, but i understand the idea, just wish there was also a way to add some more details and color. And so my ending note with this piece is that it has some good value to it, it has some artistice style to it, and i pretty much enjoyed what you have presented here, hope that you make many more great stuff as this one, it was top notch in my book.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
And while my reviews do seem very positive i thought i would take the time to suggest some ideas, tips and some little advice for some sort of improvment and if not then it was all in good pleasure viewing your work. So as mentioned some more ways to add some extra details more shades and linework showing would be nice, and maybe a touch of color aswell.