Lick her like lollipop.
I like the overall, in fact.. I llllloove it! The light feature makes a great addition! Plus, you should've drawn a confused teenage boy just for the giggles..
But one thing doesn't seem right, the spaces between the eyes,nose and mouth kinda looks weird from the angle she actually is.. But screw that! KUDOS FOR YOU SIRE!
Nice, but the eyes seem a bit off ...
The eyes seem chameleon'ish and the angle (the way they are facing) is not good if you're making a picture like this.
It is better if the main subject is focusing on either "us" or another subject within the picture, otherwise it can confuse the "us" and or create a whole new setting within the picture which is not meant to be.
I hope you get my point.
Otherwise it was quite nice.
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