Very nice

I like the way you have this set up. It seems like this piece needs some sort of border it would allow for more focus to the main point of view so nice work here and great characters maybe even ad some depth to the background

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Some borders and frames and some depth in the backrounds

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'Course'? In response to the self-descriptive narration?Some other reference there? Either nice: nice character art. Seems to bring across her personality too. All in motion, and character. Nice.

-cd-