From what i can tell the base is good but all the colors and designs muddle and confuse the whole piece, making it very difficult to discern anything at a glance. Even with further inspection the lack of clarity really hurts the piece. Anything to distinguish the characters, objects, and clothing, such as differing color pallettes, bolder lineart, consistency in patterns, or just spacing things out more would help a ton, and not just with clarity, in general too.