Still no Brook? 0 out of 5! joking again, looks good, but do you finished the Enies Lobby before making this because in your description Robin is evil...
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My favorite arc is definitively all the way from Impel-Down to the Whitebeard saga, even if Usopp doesn't makes any appearance, buggy and Bon-chan manage to fill the space perfectly, and goddammit i cried manly tears with Bon-chan, Bon-chaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan!
and then Ace, Aceeeeeeeeeeeee!
and then Blackbeard appears and reveals his new crew, and then Whitebeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaard nooooo.
and then Shanks appears and stops Akainu! and then 2 years passes, and then Akainu becomes head admiral and defeats Aokiji but doesnt kills him even if it was a duel to the death, and then everyone goes to the new world, and goddammit so much happens in that part!!!!!
Yeah Enies Lobby was good, but from Sabaody Archipelago onward shit starts getting real even more than before.
And i maybe the only one who doesn't hates Akainu, i mean we need antagonist like that, is a necessity, plus that awesome bastard is badass! is like the only marine that has done is work.