ellis dee
Inktober #11
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I drew a haiku today.
Cyberdevil responds:
Google time!
Nice change
Good job on doing something a bit different. I do like the change here and adding a hiaku. What an odd one tho, where did the dragon come from why is he sipping? So many questions, but good use of characters to match your hiaku. I think the line art is good for solid black inking and I do love your font as always, but I feel this one could have done with some color. I mean it is a dragon and those stand out much more with color and pizzaz. I think just next time add color and you'll be good. This did remind me of an old newspaper cartoon and really looks professional.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try adding some color nice time, more so to the dragon
~X~
Cyberdevil responds:
So many questions, and alas, no answers! XD If I recall correctly I was going for the most random thing I could think here. Mission accomplished? Good advice with the color, do think that would've looked better here. TY for the reviews!
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