Don't order the float. Just trust me on this one.

More practice! Especially with shading! But I also experimented a bit with the linework and thickness. Now the artstyle looks rather cartoony, which is probably not a bad thing. What do you think? As for the shading, I think it's getting better, though I'm starting to wonder if it's too elaborate for the artstyle. Maybe more hard shadows and less soft shadows would look better...?