You Illustrate adventure
There was good "ADVENTURE" here seems like it ended short though seems like there could have been more to the story, So You Illustrate adventure with this episode and it shows off well, your characters shine in this one and you bring out the detail a little bit more on this one and thats a cool thing, A very entertaining part of the comic here, this comic keeps on going and going lol, anyways nice work.
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
seems like it ended short though seems like there could have been more to the story
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