John Grey


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John Grey
Born: 1821

Bio: Born as an orphan in Spain, he never knew his parent's. He grew up searching for his true family name, but gave himself the name John Grey. After discovering he was born an assassin, he dedicated his life to the creed. Afterwards, he soon made a legend of himself, stopping templar, British soldiers on the seas. He became a captain and is on the search for a Piece of Eden, after he steals a map from a templar ship, and realizes the destruction they could do with it.

So there's a short little bio on my Assassin.


Though the colours and the style really reminds me of the old Assassins Creed game, I can't help but point out that the fingers look unnatural. But what I do like though is how you didn't completely rip the armour straight from the game and copy it onto your art. Also, I know what you tried to do, cover up the eyes with the hood, or at least make the shadow cover his eyes. But if you tried to make the shadow cover his eyes, you should have made it darker. Looking at his face seems like a real error, because it shows he has no eyes. (Unless his eyes are on his forehead, but I doubt it). Overall, I like what you did, but it just needs some fixes. Keep it up.

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ChaseCraft11 responds:

I might draw an update of this and fix the errors you pointed out. Thanks for reviewing this and letting me know what I can do to make it better.

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3.30 / 5.00

Apr 18, 2012
1:38 AM EDT
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1700 x 2260 px
1.3 MB

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