Interesting
So this was an interesting piece here, kind of "FUNNY" and I found it very "AMUSING" and you braught some good humor wish you had made this longer but the joke was well executed on this, I would suggest some backround detail maybe even start a nice web comic from it, anyways nice entry here.
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I would suggest some backround detail maybe even start a nice web comic from it
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