I saw what you did thier

It was pretty ovbious that the princess was hinding some feeling other than trama from the start. Not being thrilled, relived or bored at the sight of the main hero and the look of the (for the sake of argument ) villan had a look on his face of confusion and fasanataion with the princess . I won't hold it agents you for the lack of colors but please work on the overall set of the comic : the characters fells flat and boreing along with the back grounds. I had to shift my eyes from speech buble to speech bubble to keep from getting board(i know i can't spell!) of the lifeless characters.

for a low qualitly comic it's has a pretty good plot and keep up the good work