The guy below me demands that all artists must make sexy art, or else they're just kids, that makes complete sense. Sounds like he needs to go to porn hub ASAP. He could use some tutoring in English as well.
I think it looks good, the shading is well done and the shaping of her stomach is a nice touch, but the outlines throughout her entire body seem to really pop out and makes the picture look like it has a lower quality than it could have. Other than that, it's a nice piece of art.