I only see 2 things in it that stick out to me, and that is the following:
1. The skirt. it has an upward curve giving the appearance of viewing it from below, but the rest of the art looks like it's level with her waist to me. I don't know if that's the intended angle or not, but that's how I perceive it.
2. I don't know if it's that the hips are really wide, or if the chest is thin, but the top and bottom don't really seem to match up.
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Remake of my Old Artwork (Bored) http://www.newgrounds.com /art/view/bocodamondo/bor ed
well i wasnt bored as i made this xD
something on the artwork still makes me feel unsedifited..but i dont know what..
can you know it? i need a dick hard critic wich i can learn something from it please!
bocodamondo responds:
hmm...yeah maybe thats what's make me feel fishy & unsatisfied when i see it :S
Well now I can see you're improvement more clearly! :P
bocodamondo responds:
O I C TNKS
Wow..I think you've got alot better.. Its flawless in my opinion! VERY GOOD I LOVE IT
bocodamondo responds:
im really glad you like it ^^
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