A cute comic
So this was a rather "CUTE" comic, you should think about making these longer maybe a few more frames, and maybe even making a long running web comic of some sort, this was a good joke well executed and the artwork was notbad either I enjoyed this piece here.
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you should think about making these longer maybe a few more frames, and maybe even making a long running web comic of some sort
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A fair analysis.
For one thing, I enjoy drawing like I did when I was 9 years old. I'd like to believe I could make more detailed artwork, but my cartoon character was invented when I was a child.
I usually choose the amount of frames based off the story I want to tell with them. I've occasionally, in the past, made some strips without dialogue to kind of emphasize the point that there's an awkward pause between scenes. If you wish to elaborate on their length I am more than willing to hear your input.
What sort of web comic would you prefer to see? A running series based on random events, or something along a plotline that takes place along a series of story-based events? I've had plans for both.
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