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COMM - A Tail of

Book Cover commission for FoxyToast on twitter! I don't do a lot of backgrounds/settings so this was a fun challenge!

What's it a "tail" of? I'm not sure. I think they're putting text in there. It's probably related to the story Furball's telling Archie and Rae.

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SomeTinyCritter

2019-03-19 02:21:21

Your art style is so cute! The colours in this piece come together really well too! Archie must've been sitting for a long time for his marshmallow to melt over a cute little fire, hehe

If I may suggest any improvements, the tree on the left works wonders for visual narration, but it looks like it could do with an outline like the bushes in the foreground. It's got shading like the foreground bushes but the 'linelessness' of the background trees. This is only a minor nitpick though and for someone who doesn't often do backgrounds you still made an amazing piece overall! <3

AtroxChobatsu responds:

Ah yeah, I see what you mean. I was hoping to use the transition to lineless for distance, like the further away the foliage gets, the less detailed they get. The pine tree does blend into the clump of trees behind it, though, and some lines would have helped it stand out more.

Thanks for the advice!

SoulCyclone

2019-03-18 12:23:27

Looks cool!

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AtroxChobatsu

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Uploaded: Mar 18, 2019; 9:01 AM EDT
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