I don't wanna be that guy, but her whole body is broken, mostly the back, the legs, the butt. And it looks like her upper body is separated from her lower body. And I guess you'd need to add more detail. Especially on the hair.
Thanks, I'll keep that in mind, especially since I'm not very good at anatomy/poses, and I totally agree that I don't put enough detail generally, I'll make sure to work on that.
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