Well designed and clear narrative sketch, would love to see this finished. You're pretty skilled and creative, definitely worthy to be approved!

The Fuck are you doing in the undiscovered list? Look I get you tried to cop out with spandex but it looks like she's getting ready to get a tramp stamp back there. Sorry to say, this is Newgrounds, saying its spandex isn't going to keep the kids here from putting thier hand down thier pants or keep you out the M rating list.

Lets start subtle, even though you're obviously drawing a bit more realistic than the regular style, you still manage to get a sense of cartoony weight. Those mangled toobs at the top, the bouncy shine of the glass, and the bordering lines on those fists, they seem simple but without them you'd be out of the game's artstyle IMO. Though I may be just way too used to the view of those Ps1 days.
otherwise
Perspective:Check!
Proportions:Check!
Extensive Brush Shading:Check!
Strong Focal Points:Check!
Difficult Details: Yup theres a reflection Check!
Hell and I said all that before I even looked at the full size image. Prepare for a lot more votes once you get out of the birthpools.