great art! i love the pose, and the colors alot!!
but i think u should practice more on how to color clothes, like her jeans should have crisscross design, rather than looking glossy, and the shadows on the shit should be more block and simplistic rather than airbrush/blurred
and i think the eyes look slightly cross, and the hair is just defying the laws of physics
and the amount of thigh gap she has is unreal bro, its like her hips dislocated and a baby could drop down any minute.
also the last thing, u should make ur lineart slightly more visible in the face area, cuz the body and other elements have solid lineart, but 0 on the face
but all in all, i like this character!
good luck!