This was good, but I didn't like it as much as most people. I guess I just thought it wasn't that unique. You still work great with the red and green colors. Is that something to do with Christmas? Anyway, it is great to see the look on that guy's face. That's a nice checkered shirt too.
I like how the quotes were used. It puts more emotion on the piece. Now this again seems more like classic noir. It isn't a joke about it or anything. Your name looks like "Al" when I see it with more browsers.