I didn't care for this at all. It was weird to see her vagina like that. I mean, it's not a really attractive looking vagina. From the speech bubbles in the thumbnail, I thought this would be another comic. At least the other guy was drawn in the style of that comic.
Again, I don't think the all caps was necessary. It just looks too sketchy. At least it was something unique from you. Those are probably the highest shoes I've ever seen. I guess I just don't like stickam.