that damned pose
You need to do more faces for that girl character she was really getting on my nerves having the same god damned smirk in every scene no matter what she was doing
Reviews for "Sparken and Tael Ep.1"
stylish
if possible, add some kind of a voice over in the next installment. it would be worthwhile if you were wanting to drag this into a long running series. Otherwise, its pretty good and worthy of Newgrounds. The music was pretty good but i think you should run the music chage a little closer to when the skeletal beast first appears to add the suspense. thanks
its good i enjoyed it
there are only to problems i have with this they are not major but it would be good if you included it in ep. 2 voices . have voices with the subtitles and. who make them take steps instead of sliding . but other than that its great the music is awsome good choise
not bad
....but your animation is poor the only good example of animation was him running, i mean the rest was just tweening the pictures of them standing.....and also voice acting makes a BIG difference.......your characters are quite well drawn, they are a little shakky still tho, touch them up a bit and shade them a little and they will look better, they need more expression coz right now they are just moving pictures of them stading still....music was good though
Needs more animations...
cause it would be way better if it did. Drawings wern't bad, but they didn't seem to move much. The series sounds like a great idea though...