a good start, but has a problem...
I can't see the rest of your movie because at the part where the NG boy comes in, there is no button to click on to advance to the next frame. I suggest you make adjustments to your movie so that button is there for us to click on. It would be nice if there was sound, but it doesn't bother me if it's silent, since it appears to be a decent flash....grphx seem good, the story seems good, but don't know what you're going to do with it, until that button appears. I would've given higher than a "6" on the review if it weren't for that thing I mentioned.