Nicely done!
Ok the piano opening was amazingly cool, the oboe phrases are moving however, the direction seems unclear, it didn't sound melodic. The back ground was slow paced and the high violin notes jump from the left side to the right side, it made me dizzy... lol but its a cool effect, I just dont think you've mastered it. there are parts in this piece that makes it seem like u are experimenting new functions of your tools (thunder), how did you make it sound this good, I dont know. You always wright beautiful piano phrases, its been your forte since i've heard your first song, idk what or when that is anymore. Just pointing out that this is a beautiful piece but there are just some really static phrases. I find it difficult to compare anyone in the composition fields with you, even professionals.