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you didnt think of anything origanal and you survived only on your half ok corous if i wanted to listen to poor techno i would stay on bray streats nd listen to cars go by you need something new a meaning to the song or a bass of it you alsoneed a bigger set of verses actualy put in a piece of the song to keep viriaty and i hope this helps that i dont just sound like a bastard but you need something new