Not bad...
Not bad...Not bad atoll.
Reviews for "Forest Melody"
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sounds more like a village theme, i'd have to go with divixmage. still a pretty good piece, with a great childish tranquility type of feel. it actually reminds me of a Nickelodeon Junior kids show, when they frolic through their homes playin hide and seek lol (i dont mean this in a bad way at all).
cheerful nylon string chords in the background, melded quite well with the lead flute melodies and slowly moving string sections. I like how you rhythmically wrote them, it kind adds a "skipping" type of motion to just compliment the over all themes of the track. so solid overall composition; it just ends to abruptly, you need some conclusion of sorts (or just loop the track) , maybe slowdown the rhythm guitar in the background and then end on a nice major chord.
overall instruments used are not the most authentic sounding and could use more stereo usage to make it fuller track, but there's no real unwanted sounds in here so I cant say thats a real flaw. though- if this was forest-esque I would just personally be looking for some deeper, bassier sounds, maybe a tribal touch like a pan flute (like you mentioned below), maybe some mallet percussion and some actual ambience, like crickets or such. I think it would be a good idea, no? This is still a nice, serene audio piece here tho man!!
r0bz0r responds:
Wow, well firstly, thanks a lot for your in depth review. You've made a lot of good points, and I'd definitely like to go back to the drawing board on this one. I do agree though, the instruments do sound too artificial, and there could be a more "hollow" sounding flute.
Eh, I'm reviewing my own work! But anyway, thanks again for the review, it's always good to have someone tell me how to improve :3
*ranks your review as helpful!*
good
Not my favorite type of song, but it is still good. You should try doing actual video game covers rather than just songs insprired by them.
r0bz0r responds:
I have done a few, check out my other songs :O