Erg....
Sorry man, that was blood painful. I couldn't get past the prologue because your grammar skills are severely lacking, not to mention that half of the text boxes extend over the edge of the window, so you're left guessing at what some of the words are. Also, don't put white text against pale yellow or white backgrounds. It's impossible to read. I missed half of the prologue because of this.
Good graphics. You do that artwork yourself? It looks good.
If you're going to use a music loop, for the love of GOD cut it off at the end of a bar and loop it from there, instead of in the middle. It makes your music track sound like shit. If you can't get it to work that way, then get a REAL music loop and stick that in instead.
I have no desire to look at the rest of your movies about this Dead Rain business. I'm sure it has some merits, but I can't suffer spelling and grammar as bad as that. Good luck in your future endeavors.