Nice work
~~PROLOGUE~~
~~OPINION~~
Personally i thought the prologue to quite slow though it gives the slow readers more to scan the letters.
The words,sketches and the backgrounds overlap each other sometimes thus making it harder to read over certain backgrounds....
~~EXTRA COMMENTS~~
Very nice sketches,but they need to be outlined more throughly and/or have more defined lines so its easy to follow with the eyes. Music sounds good, but very repetitive.....
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~~MOVIE~~
~~OPINION~~
Haha........you've certainly the first i've seen.....
The music blended excellently yet the only thing missing was the good voices to fill the gaps in.Connecting the speech bubbles to their heads could had a better effect,but hey,it's a original idea and i love it!
The graphics were real good because they were nicely hand drawn, and had time put into them. But the movement was a bit choppy....
There were minor spelling errors, I'm not gonna complain about them, but next time have some spell check partners with you next time. Also the screen size didn't fit on NG, and some of the words were cutoff.
~~EXTRA COMMENTS~~
It is to a certain point an original piece of work. The episode keeps you interested till the end, and also has a nice prologue....
Until i arouse from my sleep again,
~MisterXiaopup